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A Celebration of 21st Century Poets

Writers Village University is please to present "A Celebration of 21st Century Poets," in honor of National Poetry Month.

This online exhibit was put together to highlight the legacy and ongoing achievement of poets everywhere, to introduce a larger audience to the pleasures of reading poetry and to bring poets and poetry to public attention.

The exhibit features the work of nine poets from three countries: the United States, Canada and the Philippines. The poets whose work will be exhibited are Linda J. Austin. Korie Beth Brown, Molly Critchlow, R. Joyce Heon, Glennis Hobbs, Arlene Lawson, Carol Malley, Rolly delos Santos, and Gwen Austin. These poets are all members of the Senior Poets’ Workshop at WVU.

The poetry features a cross section of work including witness poems, poems written to honour other poets as well as landscape poems.

The exhibit can be viewed here during the month of April and is accessible to everyone.


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Catherine's Kitchen

Catherine Manning

Good Morning

MORNING, it's Sunday again and this is the first chance I've had to concentrate on the column. The older I get, the busier I get and I don't think it's supposed to be that way!

Everything is parched as we've had no rain for quite a while. It tries to rain but the wind is so high that it blows it away. Still, the grass needs cutting, so I will have to attempt that tomorrow as I'm cooking lunch today for my mother and Nat and don't feel like pushing the lawnmower as well. Other to that the weather is beautiful, very cool and breezy, sometimes even forcing me to use a blanket at night, as I refuse to shut the windows. The sea is its usual way, has gone from rough to smooth to rough again and is capping. The moonlight is brilliant and my tomcat won't stay home. Must do something about that as he's already populated the village. He was born up here and walked in as a kitten, so reckon he thinks it's his right!

My mother hasn't been well and is staying for a few days, so I have to make sure she eats properly as she doesn't bother about cooking for herself very much now. My aunt just told me I should open an old people's home and she and my uncle would join my mother! Not sure about that though!

TODAY is Monday and I still haven't finished this. I attempted the grass and a third of the way through the lawnmower died, then the wacker ran out of string and I couldn't bother to re-fill as my arm was also giving out. Anyway the worse was done but hope the brain will work and I can finish the column! And, yes, the lawnmower had oil and gas so maybe it's the plug; that remains to be seen!

BTW I did try the peanut recipes from the 'old ladies' cookbook and they were nice but came out more cake-like than cookies. I did adapt and they were good, I ate them, but where I put my notes in this mess is a mystery so I will have to look. It was tidy here the other day but I have fallen behind on my filing, so I hope I'll find them soon.

Strangely enough, last night I was looking through the same cookbook belonging to my old cousins (100 years old) and found the same recipes in a local cookbook that wasn't published till 1966. I suppose that all the ladies of that time exchanged recipes and had their tea parties (they had nothing else to do and didn't work) but it still seemed a coincidence. The cookbook I'm talking about belonging to the old ladies was a hand-written cookbook of recipes they had collected and used, not a published book.

TWICELAID (Alice Manning)

!/2 lb salt fish (salt cod) well freshened.
1-1/2 lb. English potatoes, breadcrumbs or yam.
3/4 lb. fat corned pork.

Boil all together and pound in a mortar.
Mince 1 lb. of shallots or onions, 3 eggs in a little milk to moisten, a little thyme and pepper.
Mix these ingredients well, put in pie dish. Slightly whisk an egg... and bake.
(The writing goes funny, but I assume it means pour the beaten egg over and bake.)

Recipe from 1966 cookbook
Twicelaid

  • Boil together 1/2 lb. salt fish (cod) freshened,
  • 1/2 lb. English potatoes
  • 1/2 lb. of rather fat salt pork

When done pound them with 1 lb. of onions or shallots, 3 eggs, enough milk to moisten, a little thyme and pepper.
Mix well and put in pie dish, throw a beaten egg over the top and bake.

Apart from the amount of potatoes, the recipe is basically the same. I have never tried it, but it seems almost like an omelette to me. Interesting, I have everything in the house, but would use a food processor. I think while my mother is here, I'll try it!!

This is another interesting one, but I have never used the word 'kid' for children and therefore interpret the word as meaning 'baby goat' as of course it does! Even so, I would never do it as I would prefer to have a 'pet kid' running around!

Roast Kid

Prepare the kid by washing it clean with lime juice, salt and water; hang it up to drain, scald and mince the liver and heartslet (which is the lighter part of the liver). Add black pepper, salt, onions, sweet herbs; and mixed with as many 'sopped biscuits', squeezed dry and fried with onion and chopped bacon, as will fill the kid fairly full. Add the yolks of 2 eggs, butter enough to moisten, a wine glass of wine, a little nutmeg and 6 beaten cloves. Stuff this into your kid, sew up and bake. Serve with its own gravy and guava jelly or kid sauce.

Sop Biscuits

As far as I remember, sop biscuits are made from hard biscuits and soaked in milk or water and then squeezed dry. I don't know what to compare them with other than our Eclipse. But they are dry biscuits, made from nothing but flour and water etc and are used for (apart from eating!) stuffings etc.

Some more strange ones:

Cliff Rack

This is ginger tea, flavoured with rum.

Goat Hair

1 pint raw liquor (sugar cane juice), the juice of one lime, 1 gill of rum (4 ozs), grated nutmeg on the top.

Nankeen

This is coffee flavoured with rum.

Tewahiddle

1 pint of beer, 1 tbs. brandy, 1 tsp. sugar, a little nutmeg or ginger on top, and a roll of thin cut lemon peel.

Ricey Cocoa

Boil until soft half a pint of rice, add while hot some milk wrung out of coconuts, grate a little nutmeg, spice and sugar to taste.

On this point I'm leaving as Margaret is waiting and so is my mother for dinner. Think I'll give her some mixed grill tonight, liver and bacon, etc. Put some iron in her!

Bon Appetit
Cath


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Alison Hawke

Time management

Normally, I'm pretty organised about writing my column. Normally, I'm not partway through buying our first house. So it got me thinking about time management, fitting writing in around a day job, schedules and plans. I'm wondering about how to take notes and write thoughts when I'm away from my laptop.

How do you find time for writing? How does it fit into a working day? I'd like to hear from you how you slot it into your schedule. I need all the help I can get! Please email me about how you manage your writing time.

John Grisham used to jot story ideas on legal pads while in court. I've learnt always to carry a notebook and pen with me, but you have to type those notes into a computer in the end. Is anyone out there writing with a PDA (Psion, Palm, Sony Clié, HP Journada, Compaq iPaq, Handspring Visor, etc)?

(Normal Fiction Corner service should return in June, when we're in the new house.)


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Laurie Lupold

The past month was a very traumatic passing for me. I lost the love of someone I truly respected. Someone who had my heart and soul at arms reach though he remained miles away.

Then we made arrangements to meet and we did meet in spite of all that kept that from happening. We spent two wonderful days together. The third I waited and he never did come. I waited, then called him at home. He was there and he was cruel. He had not one good word to say about me. Nor did he have a nice word to say about my daughter whom he said "should be slapped several times."

I was devastated. Who was this imposter? And what had he done with the man I'd grown to love over the past several years? The unfortunate thing is that not everyone takes their time spent on the computer seriously but there are those that do. They are many times those who fall victim to liars and players. Those who find happiness which builds them up and in the grand finale of things leaves them with emptiness. The scars are yet to heal from this wound. I shared many of my secrets with this individual, more than anyone I've ever known. I still mourn that loss. I thought what might be helpful to me as a method of healing would be to send him a good-bye letter and just pour my emotion into the pages along with the tears I will undoubtedly shed. I owe that to myself to bring some sort of closure to the situation.

I want to leave with this: those of you who have open, loving hearts, never change who you are in spite of the fact you may endure a few scars. You are the warm and loving people that makes this world a pleasant place to be. It is your support and compassion that washes over the land in various directions uniting us together as one unique people. As for those who may not maintain such kindness, do not lend anger toward them, pity them, for they may never know the beauty of a smile or the warmth of a hug.


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Kathleen Helen Strom

Langston Hughes Remembered

My initial introduction to Langston Hughes came through a poetry appreciation class at Writers Village University. Our course of study included Hughes's first published poem, "The Negro Speaks of Rivers." I was touched by the depth and simplicity of this much loved poem and wanted to discover more about the man and his work. As it turned out, ample opportunity to do so was just around the corner.

Early in the new year, I learned that Langston Hughes had been chosen as the official poet of America, and was to be honoured in a multitude of ways. Beginning in February, through National Poetry Month - April and beyond, his star was destined to rise in a nationwide celebration dedicated to the man, his life, and his poetry. Today, at my fingertips, I have a wealth of information about this extraordinary poet and I'd like to share it with you.

Celebrations for Langston Hughes

For the past seven years The Academy of American Poets have sponsored National Poetry Month during the month of April. This nationwide celebration focuses on the importance of poetry in American culture, and involves business and non-profit organizations. Throughout the month of April, libraries, schools, book stores, coffeehouses, cultural centers and parks will take on a festive springtime air, as poetry blooms in the heart of community life, through performances, festivals, readings, workshops and symposiums. This year, Langston Hughes, was selected as the premier poet for his outstanding contribution to American poetry, to African-American culture, and the celebration of the 100th anniversary of his birth.

In light of this, Langston Hughes will be the sole focus of the Academy of American Poets’ national advertising campaign. Each April, the Academy creates almost 200,000 National Poetry Month posters that are freely distributed to U.S. schools, libraries, bookstores, and community centers to help promote their month-long celebration and to increase poetry awareness.

In addition, the Academy is partnering with the Langston Hughes National Poetry Project, based at the University of Kansas, and the National Council of Teachers of English (NCTE) to sponsor a number of special events, including a Langston Hughes Poetry Day on April 2, 2002. On that day, millions of people across America will gather in reading groups to enjoy and discuss his poetry. Even though this article will not be published until after the event, I encourage you to visit the following web site for a reading guide. It's not too late to form a reading group of your own in April. This is a wonderfully detailed site, dedicated to "Reading and Remembering Langston Hughes". Here you will find something for both the heart and mind. A reading group guide is available at here.

On April 30, the PEN American Center and the Academy will co-sponsor a tribute to Hughes at Town Hall, New York, NY. This "Twentieth- Century Masters Tribute To Langston Hughes" will feature Arnold Rampersad, Ruby Dee, Ossie Davis, Sonia Sanchez, and Willie Perdomo. Tickets are available through Ticketmaster 212-307-4100. These two Langston Hughes celebrations will serve as the alpha and omega to a month committed to celebrating the achievements of American poets, and to making poetry more accessible to the public.

In a campaign to recognize American poets on U. S. postage stamps, the Academy of American Poets participated by offering the public an online vote during March and April, 2001. The Academy invited the public to cast ballots for their favourite American poets at their web site. More than 10,000 people did so. In all 205 poets were nominated for future stamps, but the people's number one choice for 2002 was Langston Hughes with a vote of 2,294. First runner-up was Sylvia Plath with 597 votes.

On the poet's centennial birthday, February 1, 2002, the United States Postal Service issued a Langston Hughes stamp as part of its Black Heritage series. The 34-cent, first-class stamp features a black and white photograph of a Hughes as a young man in New York City. It is the 25th stamp in the Post Office's Black Heritage series. To mark the occasion, a ceremony was held in Harlem, New York City, at the Schomburg Center for Research in Black Culture. On the same day, the Smithsonian's National Postal Museum in Washington, D. C. opened an exhibit on his life and work that will extend through August 2, 2002.

A great many other Hughes centennial celebrations have already taken place throughout the month of February. Official functions in his boyhood hometown of Lawrence, Kansas included a three-day symposium of scholars, poets, and performance artists who explored themes relating to Hughes' life, work, and broad influence. The National Endowment for the Humanities provided a grant to the University of Kansas for the Langston Hughes National Poetry Project. The grant supported the public activities, online resources, and print materials on Langston Hughes and American poetry, including this symposium. The project will promote reading, listening, and appreciating poetry in the United States and abroad through poetry circles. For information or to sponsor a poetry circle, write Alison Watkins, Langston Hughes Poetry Project, Hall Center for the Humanities, University of Kansas, Lawrence, Kansas 66045; e-mail awatkins@ku.edu or phone 785-864-7836.

In all of this it is clearly evident that Langston Hughes has touched the hearts of the people as much as Walt Whitman, Carl Sandburg, and Paul Laurence Dunbar, poets he admired, and whose work influenced his own. And obvious, too, that Hughes has reached a pinnacle of success that is reserved for the great ones.

What is it, I wondered, that sets one poet apart from another? What is it about this poet's life and personality that enabled him to write poems that are more than pretty words on paper? And how is it that his heartfelt, searching words draw us back, time and again, to savour the bittersweet riches hidden there? Who is this man? Why has he risen to the top? And what can students of poetry learn from him?

The Life and Times of Langston Hughes

Langston Hughes was born February 1, 1902, in Joplin, Missouri, a black boy, in a black community, in a white man's world. Segregation of black and white was still a painfully inflicted standard in the South. Soon after his birth, his father abandoned the family and left the country to live in Mexico. His young mother put Langston in the care of his grandmother, Mary Langston, who lived in Lawrence, Kansas, while she sought work to support him. Although they were financially poor, the little boy had riches that couldn't be added on a calculator. In his formative years he had the love and nurture of an educated grandmother. She sent him to school, and at home filled his mind with stories of the past. His mother, Carrie Mercer Langston Hughes, managed in difficult circumstances, to provide and mother him as much as she was able. As an aspiring actress she liked to entertain her son with recitations of classical poetry. The black community they lived in was warm and welcoming, filled with people who had migrated there to establish new lives in a free state.

When Langston was twelve years old, his aged grandmother passed away. He went to live with his mother and stepfather in Illinois, then later to Ohio where he finished high school. But most of his youth was spent in Kansas, and Kansas is proud to claim him as their own. Out of this humble childhood, Langston carried a great respect and admiration for the poor people he met there, "low-down folks," with their quiet dignity and pride. Of them, he said, "They accept what beauty is their own without question." Like all great writers, he wrote about what he knew best. Many of his poems are about the Kansas where he grew up.

When he was a high school student in Ohio, Langston began writing poetry. He was elected class poet and editor of the high school annual. At the age of eighteen he wrote, "The Negro Speaks of Rivers." It was published in "The Crisis," a magazine of the National Association for the Advancement of Colored People. It has also been set to music by many composers. The inspiration for this poem came when he was traveling by train across a bridge, spanning the Mississippi River. It was quickly written on the back of an envelope in about fifteen minutes. Of Langston Hughes it has been said that he found poetry in the ordinary, everyday things of life and made it seem deceptively simple.

Following graduation, Hughes lived for a year with his father, a businessman and landowner in Toluca, Mexico. There was conflict between them over his desire to write. His father wanted him to be an engineer and offered to pay his way in Columbia University. Langston tried briefly to be the dutiful son, but left that course of study within a year to follow his own dreams. As a young adult he earned his living by working at a variety of odd jobs, then broadened his life experience and education with working voyages to Africa and Europe. He jumped ship in Europe and lived in Paris for several months, and later a month in Venice, Italy, where he wrote "I too am America." When he returned home, he lived with his mother for a year in Washington, D.C. In 1924, he moved to Harlem, New York. Inspired by visits to a Harlem cabaret, Hughes wrote his first book of poetry, "The Weary Blues," which was published to good reviews in 1926. He returned to the classroom as a mature student and graduated from Lincoln University, Pennsylvania in June 1929.

Hughes loved not only the people of his time, but also their music, especially blues songs that express sad themes. The jazz clubs of Chicago, New York, Kansas City and Washington, D. C. were a major influence on his writing. It has been said of Hughes that he was innovative and ahead of his time. He was the first to give America hip-hop or spoken-word art. Rap music today is but another form of this oral tradition. And yet, he was also criticized as being too common and lacking in poetic style. His use of dialect was a sore point for some. But Hughes wasn't bothered by any of this, he simply wrote what he experienced and what he learned from the everyday folks around him. His 1920s poetry featured the stories of his Afro-American brothers and sisters in their own vernacular, a loving presentation of the joys and heartaches of everyday life. He mirrored their thoughts, echoed their voice, and was much loved for giving their life experience back to them in song. "The Weary Blues" is representative of this period. These poems are spoken of as jazz and blues poems. In 1958 he recorded his poetry to the music of jazz and blues artists.

In the years of Great Depression, the 1930s, Hughes' poetry took on a radical, political tone. In 1935, "Let America Be America Again" spoke poignantly of a heartfelt plea for free life for all, in a land that is free. And "Goodbye Christ" is a defiant statement of a conversion to socialism that created a furor in political and religious circles and caused Hughes to be fiercely condemned for what was viewed as evidence of a pro-communist stand at a time when paranoia in politics ruled the day. In order to establish himself anew, as an unequivocally four-square American, he later repudiated this poem and suppressed others with socialist themes. Near the end of his life, he spoke of this troubled time. "For the poet, politics in any country in the world had better be disguised as poetry. Politics can be the graveyard of the poet. And only poetry can be his resurrection."

In the 1940s he swung back to earlier topics that he referred to as "Negroes, nature, and love." In the postwar years he settled down in Harlem where he remained, writing poetry that was inspired and shaped by the jazz tunes of black musicians like Dizzy Gillespie and Charlie Parker. His collected works of poetry include "The Dream Keeper" (1932), a children's collection, "Shakespeare in Harlem" (1942), "Dream Deferred" (1951), "One Way Ticket" (1949), "Montage of a Dream Deferred" (1951) and "The Panther and the Lash" (1967, posthumously).

Langston Hughes is also remembered for a prolific amount of work in other genre. He wrote novels, short stories, histories, essays, stage plays, musicals, anthologies, and a humourous newspaper column. In all of his writing Hughes promoted racial pride with condemnation of racism and injustice in a heartwarming celebration of African American culture. He also translated stories and poems for foreign writers. His first novel, "Not Without Laughter," won the Harmon gold medal for literature in 1930. He wrote two autobiographical volumes. "The Big Sea" (1940) and "I Wonder as I Wander" (1956). In 1961 he was inducted into the National Institute of Arts and Letters. In his long and distinguished career, Hughes was an inspiration to untold numbers of African American writers.

On May 22, 1967, Langston Hughes died unexpectedly from complications following prostate surgery. He was just 65 years old, a brilliant artist whose voice was silenced much too soon. However, his 46-year legacy of literature lives on in the hearts of the people, and as America’s National Poet 2002 he will be well remembered. In 1991 his cremated remains were interred beneath a commemorative tile floor in the Schomburg Centre for Research in Black Culture in Harlem. Visitors to the Centre may view this memoriam and pay their respects.

Some of Langston Hughes's poetry can be found online at The Academy of American Poets. Follow the links through "Langston Hughes Centenary Exhibit." On this web page you can also hear him read his first published poem, "The Negro Speaks of Rivers." In the public library I found, "The Collected Poems of Langston Hughes," a complete collection of 860 published poems that reflect his life and times in world travel and African America through five stormy decades.

Langston Hughes had this to say about two commonly asked questions. "What is a poet?"

"A poet is a human being. Each human being must live within his time, with and for his people, and within the boundaries of his country."

"What is poetry?"

"It is the human soul entire, squeezed like a lemon or a lime, drop by drop, into atomic words."

It takes courage and wisdom to prevail and write according to one's beliefs. Hughes firmly believed that if a poet would speak to the world he must be true to his inner convictions. About that he said, "Hang yourself, poet, in your own words. Otherwise you are dead."


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Rolly delos Santos

Rolly delos Santos is an Art teacher of De La Salle Zobel School, a school on the outskirts of Manila. He has been writing poetry for about two years now, thinking it will help enhance his third eye which he uses for his paintings. Rolly has been a member of WVU for three years now and is presently a member of the advanced poetry group (P123).

Rolly’s work has previously appeared in T-Zero and Writers' Village members look forward to reading more of his work.

Truce

Take it easy, man.
I don't want to shoot!
I'm putting my gun down
you see?
Shhh, it's okay!

Don't worry! I'm alone. All alone!
Lost my troop and been walking
for miles now.
Shhh, easy on the trigger man.
I'm not shooting, okay?

You do understand English
don't you?
Okay, take it easy, man.
I may not be your friend
but let's call it a truce
for now.

this terrible rain
got me all drenched and I see
it did you too. So, why don't
we just share this cabin and
wait till it dries up?

We sure are in a lot of mess
aren't we? You know what?
You and I shouldn't be fighting.
There's really no reason to.
We should be in one of those
bars drinking till we drop dead.

Yup, just a lot of mess
we're doing for ourselves.
Far from home, wife and kids.
My mom, she's old, I don't
think I'll ever see her again.

I figure, why can't our leaders
just square off their differences
like Muhammad Ali and Joe Frazier?

Sure, I don't know anything about
economics, surplus value
credit and debit,
autonomy, sovereignty
and those big words they talk about.

But why do we have to do all the
dying for their fights?
Why can't we just go on living
our lives like others normally do?
This is silly, right?

We are errand boys playing
a deadly game of destruction.
You understand what I'm saying?
C'mon, for once let us have
some peace

Ah, it hurts, I wasn't holding my gun
How can you?
You miserable...
son...
of...
a...

Copyright © 2002 by Rolly delos Santos


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Kathleen J. Stowe

Kathleen Stowe is a new member of WVU. Her background includes nursing, teaching, and working as a flight attendant. She has previously published a mystery novel Whalebone Junction and a short story "Oh Sure--I Understand, Honey" is scheduled to be published in the spring/summer 2002 issue of Virginia Adversaria. Kathleen finds that the discipline of writing poetry teaches her to write better fiction.

Writers' Village members look forward to reading more of Kathleen's work.

Summer

You ask me why
I like summer.
I say
I like the sun.
I like the twitter of the crickets in the dark.
I like the stickiness of your sweat on my chest,
The way the ceiling fan cools us down,
Ice cubes as you melt them on my belly.

Everything is a little more trouble
In the heat of the summer.
Keeping the tuna salad fresh,
Ironing a cotton dress,
Settling a late night argument between lovers,
Making me come.

The heat shimmers off the asphalt.
Blue turns to gray, turns to white.
A dog lies unmoving at the end of the drive.
You come home to clutch at a beer from the icebox,
To listen to baseball scores on the droning radio,
Before you touch me.

Acres of tasseled corn,
A mother full with child fanning herself on the porch,
Expectation of harvest from
Lumbering machines parked at the edge of fields,
And you by my side spent satisfied and snoring.

Summer ... when the day is quiet with the heat
But the night grumbles with life.

Copyright © 2002 by Kathleen J. Stowe


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N'omi Rose

Welcome to RECOGNITIONS! A monthly column to recognize those students of Writers' Village University who have won recognition of their writing achievements!


Our Kudos to, Joan M. Fox, "Foxy", whose novel, THE RELUCTANT DUKE, was accepted by epublisher Treble Heart Books! The print version is due out in mid April. THE RELUCTANT DUKE is a Sensual Victorian Romance. She started sending The Duke to the NYC publishers about seven years ago. Then she forgot about him and went on to more three more romance books. When e-publishing really kicked in (with the urging of her WVU writing buddy, Dorice Nelson) Foxy started to send out The Duke again. THE RELUCTANT DUKE was revised at least 20 times, and rejected 19! "But I was determined that some one would love him." She says "deciding to sign up as a lifetime member has been probably one of the smartest things I've done in the past 10 years. The support in the study groups and lesson classmates has helped my writing immensely as well as brought me some very good friends whose faces I may never see. I started writing THE RELUCTANT DUKE in my F2K class, and now he's finally going to be published!" Foxy is a member of Word Slingers and Historical Romance Study Groups. Way to go Foxy!


Congratulations to Faye Whyte, whose workshop, "Goal Setting for Writers," débuted at Painted Rock (http://www.paintedrock.com) in January 2002! "I owe this to the encouragement of Jenny Turner and to Judy at WVU for giving me the opportunity". Jenny told Faye's study group about WriteFest during the planning process, when Jenny had agreed to help Judy plan and organize the workshops. Jenny asked if we would be willing to help her. Faye shared that she had been using techniques adapted from her husband's business as a strategic coach to organize Faye's writing and she would like to give a workshop along those lines. Jenny and Judy were both enthusiastic about the idea, so Faye designed the workshop. The workshop was a great success, as was WriteFest.

After WriteFest, Faye wanted to continue to offer these principles to help other writers. She queried the idea as a series of articles for Painted Rock's weekly e-zine, The Rock. Carmel Thomaston replied that she would rather offer it as a workshop through her site. The two-week workshop is offered once monthly.

"I have been a member of WVU since May 2000. WVU has been invaluable to my existence as a writer. F2K in spring 2000 was my first exposure to this friendly community. Rie Sheridan and Julie Jennings, my mentor, were particularly helpful and encouraging."

After Faye joined WVU, she took part in several courses where she learned the basics, met other writers and gained experience "shoving my words out there for others to see." More recently, Faye puts more energy into her study group, the Freestylers, "where the exchange of ideas and feedback constantly challenge me to question my assumptions and expand my horizons. I can honestly say I would not have been able to take these first faltering steps toward authorhood without the enthusiasm and support of the wonderful writers I have met at Writer's Village." Faye is also a columnist for National Association of Women Writers! http://www.naww.org/


Kudos to Charity Tahmaseb for her novel, FALSE IMPRESSIONS, winning best overall entry in the Golden Gateway Contest! The RWA (Romance Writers of America) Online Chapter, From the Heart sponsored the contest. http://www.theromanceclub.com/fth/home.htm

In which Charity included the first three chapters and the synopsis of a novel, FALSE IMPRESSIONS. Charity won first place in the romantic suspense/mainstream category, and went on to win best overall entry!

More Kudos to Charity, as she will have three pieces included in an anthology due out in May 2002. All proceeds go to support the 20th Century Veterans Memorial being built in North Platte, Nebraska. Her contributions to the anthology include: The Ring Knocker, a short story; A Short Account of the Gulf War; and a prose poem, Breakfast in the Desert, an excerpt from her novel "India Charlie." For more info, you can visit the page Charity has set up on her web site: http://www.charitytahmaseb.com/letus.htm Charity has been a member of WVU for more than three years, is very active in writing and peer-tutoring WVU courses, and hangs out at Consistents and Mythic Madness study groups!


To those of you who are excitedly looking at this column, expecting to see your writing achievements to be listed, and are disappointed to see your listing is not here, I am grievously sorry. I am sad to say I have had a computer crash, thereby losing all of December and January's Achievers. Please, will you forward our email conversations to me, so that I might list you in future columns?

N'omi Rose
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"It's either destiny or insanity. I'm miserable when I'm not writing and sometimes it's that bad when I am!"

(Borrowed from Faye Whyte)


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Nancy Horner

Camping with Whiny-Britches

The month was September and the plan was a camping trip in the wilds of Canada's Algonquin National Park in Ontario. I wasn't too awfully excited, to be honest. We were living in Michigan, at the time, and I thought that being over 1000 miles north of our usual home was about as close as I would ever come to the opportunity to drive to Maine. I wanted to go pick blueberries, just like Sal in "Blueberries For Sal," the favorite story of millions of little girls of the Sixties. And, I hate camping.

"We're going to canoe to our campsite. You'll love it," my husband said.

"I'd rather go to Maine and pick blueberries." The truth was that my idea of "roughing it" has always been sleeping in the drafty little Colorado cabin of my childhood vacations, having to shower with spiders dangling over my head, and shivering beside the heater in the morning. My father thought camping was a miserable waste of vacation time and this little apple didn't fall far from the tree.

"They have moose in Canada. Maybe we'll see a moose." Great, I thought. No showers and I might see a moose. I tried to talk my husband out of the trip, but there was no convincing him that he wasn't booking us on the greatest adventure of all time. September arrived. We packed our tiny Nissan, buckled in our only child, who was five at the time, and headed across the border. About an hour into Canada, the Nissan began to sputter and die. I wanted to turn around, but after driving for twenty miles, one mile at a time — sput, sput, sput, pull over, sput, sput, sput — we found a Nissan shop, where we managed to get the fuel pump replaced in just over an hour. Darn.

The trees were turning in Algonquin and I was pleased to see that the park looked a lot like a flattened version of Rocky Mountain National Park, which I love. Our camping package came with pre-packed meals along with a rented canoe and equipment. As our gear was packed into the canoe, we were given instructions on hoisting our food into the trees at night. "Very important," said the fellow who checked us in. "You may not encounter a bear, but we do have a lot of them and they only cause trouble if they can get to your food. Make sure you hoist the food high enough that they'd have to leap between trees; and make sure the trees are too far apart for them to succeed."

"Bears?" I said to my husband, as we waited for the canoe to be loaded. "You didn't tell me about bears."

"I didn't know," he answered innocently.

We had been canoeing regularly to build up arm strength and thought we were in great condition. What we didn't bank on was the stiff headwind blowing up whitecaps on the lake. As we paddled against the wind, our arms became so sore that I later had to sleep with my hands behind my head to numb the nerve endings.

That first night, we managed to zip three mosquitoes into the tent while loons serenaded us to sleep. I awoke itchy, sore, and far from personable. To their credit, my husband and son completely ignored me. I busied myself with snapping photographs of the beautiful scenery while David cooked breakfast in an inside-out thermal undershirt with his hair sticking out in so many directions he looked like a signpost.

"My arms are killing me," I whined, as we set off in the canoe, boating further back into the series of interconnected lakes. "And we zipped mosquitoes into the tent."

"I know," David said. "That was a mistake."

David was disappointed that we were missing the chance to follow a guide into the woods to howl at the wolves, but I thought listening to humans howl from a distance was more than adequate. Unfortunately, moose season had long since passed. We boated past small islands, tolerant loons and a few other people in canoes. The scenery was spectacular, the water crystal clear and — a shock for Americans — water scooped directly from the lake was drinkable. The second night was uneventful; and we headed back toward the dock on the third day, choosing a campsite within distant view of the lodge.

We settled into our final campsite, prepared our supper and hoisted the food into the trees, took our nightly sponge baths and climbed into our sleeping bags, taking care to make sure any mosquitoes were shooed out before we zipped up the tent. I longed for a nice, deep bathtub. I might as well have stepped outside for a refreshing shower because the third night brought rain.

By that time, though, as tired and uncomfortable as I was, I knew I would happily return for another canoeing trip if the opportunity ever arose. The sights and sounds of Algonquin Provincial Park were well worth the minor miseries.

In the morning, we packed up our equipment and headed back toward the lodge from which we'd embarked. The weather was similar to that of our first day: a stiff wind and a heavily overcast sky. Midway across the lake, with the lodge in sight, the sky opened up and rain began pouring down so heavily that water sloshed inches deep in the bottom of the boat within minutes. As we paddled with all our might, even David began to worry that we were about to become swamped and shouted at me to row harder; the rain and wind drowning out his words, but I was already paddling with all my might. Five-year-old Daniel took the weather in stride, rolling himself into a water-resistant little ball and holding on tight.

As we finally pulled up to the dock, several men came running to help us tie up the canoe and remove our gear. The canoe sat low in the water and we marveled that we'd made it to shore just in the nick of time. On the other side of the dock, we were stunned to see that a few hardy campers were just preparing to take off in the pouring rain. How could anyone leave at a time like this? It was literally raining buckets.

We were so thoroughly soaked that we didn't begin to feel dry until almost six hours later, when we reached Toronto. At our hotel, we unloaded suitcases and soggy clothing and equipment that would need to be hung up to dry; then each of us took our turn enjoying the nice, deep hotel bathtub. Clean and dry, we relaxed on hotel beds as darkness fell. David turned to little Daniel, who was happily checking out Canadian television channels. "Well," he said. "What did you think of our camping adventure?"

"It was pretty fun," Daniel answered. "It would have been more fun, though, without whiny, fussy Mom."


Nancy Horner announces the publication of her short story, "In the Kitchen With Mikey", in the JUST IN TIME Anthology, now available at Wings ePress as download or trade paperback. "In the Kitchen With Mikey" was originally written as an assignment at Writer's Village University and many wonderful students at WVU deserve huge thanks for their critiquing help on the story.


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Wynelda Shelton

Worlds Of Wonder: How to Write Science Fiction and Fantasy
By David Gerrold
Writer's Digest Books, Trade Paperback
ISBN 1-58297-007-6
$14.99 (U.S.), $23.99 (Canada)

On the surface, David Gerrold's book, "Worlds of Wonder," seems to be only about writing speculative fiction. A subtitle of "How to Write Science Fiction and Fantasy," seems to say it all.

But does it?

In this book, Gerrold demystifies many of the writing processes. Things that you need to do whether or not you are writing mainstream or Science Fiction. He explores plot lines, heroes, complications, theme, style, metaphors, paragraphs and many more issues that confront every writer. The examples and exercises are geared towards speculative fiction, but can easily be adapted to other genres. In the chapter entitled "Write from the Inside," he deals with how to describe your world to the reader. How much information is enough, and how much is too much? But most of all, how do you "evoke the experience for the reader"? Every writer has to evoke the experience, whether it is of a housewife in a suburb or an alien landing on earth.

For anyone who is fascinated with language and how we relate to it the chapters on language alone are almost worth the price of the book. "Memes" comes with the following warning: "This is the bonus chapter. It's intended for advanced students only. If you aren't interested in digging under the foundations of storytelling, you can skip it" (page 186). The assertion that "the terrifying truth is that we are our language" is one that I have to admit I find intriguing. His arguments are well thought out and entertaining, something that is often missing from discussion of linguistics. "Metric Prose" shows how fiction writers can use the poet's art of rhythm to pull a reader through a story. "To Be or Naught to Be" and "Find Another Way" go deeper than most essays on the use of passive verbs and shows his own struggles with the E-Prime theory.

The main attraction of this book is how to write Science Fiction and Fantasy. David Gerrold delivers on his promise to those of us who write speculative fiction. But he does not leave out the writers of other genres either.

All fiction is a game of "What If" and David Gerrold teaches us to play the game.

Wynelda Shelton


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Rie Sheridan

Inspiration

No writer should be without one item in his/her toolbox. Inspiration - that magical spark that lends wings to words.

Inspiration comes from the strangest places. For example, I got the kernel of an idea for a murder mystery the other day while working as a street character in a Renaissance Faire. It came from the ambience of the faire itself, and from seeing an unraveled cigarette filter lying on the ground. I have the key clue to the killer's identity and the rudimentary characters waiting in my notebook for time to write it out.

I got the idea for a song from an email message today. Someone casually mentioned a bit of history that instantly resonated in my head. I wrote the first verse at lunch one day, and sang the finished song for several musicial acts at the faire who want the lyrics.

The hero of my in-progress science fiction novel first showed up in a dream. He's come a long way, but that was the inspiration of it. Even though much of the dream was not realistic enough to be useable in the book, some snatches are still part of the plot.

I save newspaper clippings; I write down snippets of conversation; I collect music that speaks to me. Inspiration is everywhere. But you have to keep your eyes open for it. Never go anywhere without a notebook or at least pen and paper. I carry my Palm Pilot, even at the Faire, because you never know...


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